2007年10月26日金曜日

My favorite place

My favorite place
Diamond City is my favorite place to wander and shop. I’d like to explain why. It is very near from my house. There are many shops, theater and some place to eat. Wandering there is a good resource. I have been there many times and I know most shops.

Near from my house
Diamond City is located in near from my house. It takes three minutes by car. I can go there anytime. It is very convenient for me. I buy most of things I need in my daily life. Sometimes, I happen to meet my friends who went to same junior high school and I don’t see for a long time. Some of my friends work at shops there. So, I often meet someone I know.

There are many shops, theater and eating place
I like shopping very much. I went there many times. I know most shops where they are. I also know some salesclerks. When I go to their shops, I can chat with them. It is one of my enjoyments. I also like watching movies and eating. I enjoy movies there sometimes and eating lunch. I have my favorite restaurant. It is Capri cciosa. I recommend it.

Good resource
Wandering there is very good resource. Sometimes, I go there without something I have to do. I often browse through magazines and listen to music in TSUTAYA. Sometimes, I go to the theater and watch movies. Every time I watch movies at the theater, they give me a discount because I work part-time in Diamond City.

Diamond City is good a place. It is very convenient because it is close to my house. Because of it, sometimes I can meet my friends. I often go there and shop in my favorite shops. I enjoy not only shopping but talking with some salesclerks, movies and eating. These things are great resources for me. I like Diamond City and wadering there.
[321 words]

2007年10月24日水曜日

FRIEND**

I have a friend who has known since I was an elementally school student. She is very cute and I enjoy talking with her. We sometime meet at the station and go home together. Every time we meet, we talk for very long time in front of my house. Recently, we don’t have opportunities to go out together. We are busy for school and part time job. She goes to medical school and work at 31 ice cream. In the winter vacation, we are planning to go out. I’m looking forward it very much. We have lots of something to talk. It is about very girly.

[106 words]

Delicious season

Fall is the best season to have very nice foods in Japan. I eat a lot every day. My favorite food of fall season is sweet potato and maron. I want to it that every day. 1st of November, I will go to Aso with my friends. I’m looking forward to going there. I would enjoy some delicious food in Aso. Do you know a famous food of Aso? I don’t know so much. I guess milk is famous. But I don’t drink it. I think Aso has many nice foods. I will enjoy it.
[95 words]

2007年10月17日水曜日

School festival 2

I have a good memory about school festival in my junior high school days. My junior high school was in Ogawa. Our school festival was held in a big hall which my town managed. I belonged to the baseband club and I played timpani. We played three or four in front of a lot of people. I was nervous but really enjoyed it. My friends played a story. It was moving story. When the play finished, teachers were moved and shed tears.
[82 words]

school festival 1

I don’t belong to any club. But, my friends are preparing every day. They seem to be very busy. School festival will be held next month for four days. The four days, I don’t have anything to do. So, I have four days off. I might come to school festival one day of four days. But, I didn’t enjoy it so much last year. My friends who belong to a club are enjoyed very much. I wish I belonged to a club.
[82 words]

Proto-Portofolio 2-01

Proto-Portfolio 2-01: Reviews, Posts & Words

Please copy and paste the entire table below into a new post on your blog entitled "Proto-Portfolio 2-01," and start filling it in with the numbers of book reviews, blog posts, and words that you wrote during August (08), and September (09). You needn't worry about totals, fn, or indices now; we'll introduce those later. However, to make sure that you copy the entire table, please include the slash marks (beginning and end), too.

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Proto-Portfolio 2-01: Reviews, Posts and Words
Months
08
09
10
11
12
01
Totals
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Indices
Book reviews
0
3
4
9
2
18


Blog posts
2
6
13
29
40
90


Words
114
531
783
1731
17944953


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I don't include the number of essays in Blog posts.

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

2.0. Comments

Showcase
Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*




2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*



2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*




2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*




2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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2.4.2. Any of your other posts*




2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
  • ...

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase
Numbers of words
Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*
72
07.11.14
3.2. Best typing speed trial*
149
07.12.05
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)
77
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3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** 106




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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase Short titles
with links
Dates (yy.mm.dd) Words Comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
07.05.16
39
1
2-01
Nelson Mandela
07.10.10
43
0
2-02
Oprah Winfrey
07.10.17
75
0
2-03
Audrey Hepburn
07.10.17
48
0
2-04
Project Omega
07.11.05
52
0
2-05
Freckles
07.11.05
38
0
2-06
Moonfleet
07.11.28
69
0
2-07
The Earthquake
07.11.28
55
0
2-08
Marcel and the Mona Lisa
07.12.03
42
0
2-09
The winner
07.12.20
105
0
2-10
Jennifer Lopez
07.12.20
37
0
2-11
Gucci Business in fasion
07.12.20
89
0
2-12
Gandhi
07.12.20
73
0
2-13
Brad Pitt
07.12.22
55
0
2-14
Marcel goes to HOLLYWOOD
07.12.27
41
0
2-15
The gift of the Magi
07.12.27
104
0
2-16
American Life
07.12.29
44
0
2-17
Robin Hood
08.01.05
75
0
2-18
Six sketches
08.01.09
52
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TOTALS:


Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
  • [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media


Showcase
Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?
O

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? O

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? O

5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?

O

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? O

5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): ---
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  • "books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
O

  • "essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
O

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
O

  • "links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
O

  • "movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)
O

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?
O
  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • ___ other labels attached to three or more posts
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  • Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below.
    • www (n)
    • xxx (m)
    • yyy (o)
    • zzz (p)
    • ...
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? O

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?
O

  • How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics?
    • ___ posts including pictures or other graphics
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
O
  • How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?*
    • __6_ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
O
  • How many of your blog posts this semester include other media?
    • __0_ posts including other media
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  • What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here:
    1. ...
    2. ...
    3. ...

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5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
  1. ...
  2. ...
  3. ...

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

  • ...

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

  • ...

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Notes:
  1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
  2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
  3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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Book Review2-03

I read Audrey Hepburn. She was one of the most famous actress in the world. She wanted to be a ballet dancer before she became an actress. After she got older, she worked for United Nation to help poor and hungry children. I think her life was wonderful.
[48 words]

Book Review2-02

Oprah Winfrey is the most popular host in the U.S. Her show changed many people's life. She has read and written since she had been three years old. Reading is most important for her. In her show, she dicusses with the guests about books she read. Recently, she held the part for Mr. Obama. He is one of the candidatefor the president of the U.S. She is very rich and very kind for all people.
[75 words]

2007年10月10日水曜日

MEGA ESSAY

KUMAMOTO


Introduction
I like Kumamoto very much. I was born and grew up in Kumamoto until now. I'll introduce festivals, foods, famous people, sightseeing spots amd leisure spots of Kumamoto. All is my recommended things. Please enjoy it.

Festivals
●Yamaga lantern festival
"Yamaga lantern festival" is one of the most famous festivals in Japan. Women put their head on lantern(made by paper) and dance around the main street in Yamaga. It hold 2 days between "Japanese Obon". The light from lantern is slightly blight. It looks heavy, but it's very light because of paper. Visitors(Customers) enjoy women's dancing with "Yoheho bushi" that Yamaga's original music.




●Hinokuni Festival
Hinokuni Festival is the one of famous festivals in Kumamoto. It is held from August 11th to 13th every year. Many people dance to famous folk song of Kumamoto called "Otemoyan" in the center of the city.
In 13th, the big event is held. It is fire works.
You can watch ten thousand fire works. They are very beautiful. You should go.


●Myoken festival
Yatsushiro city has Myoken Festival. It is famous festival in Kyushu. It's hold in November. There are many kind of people. They walk in the city. The main character is Game. Its head is turtle and body is dragon. It has red hair on body. If you get them in the road and put them in your wallet, you can be rich.






Foods

●Ikinaridango
Ikinari dango is traditional sweet in Kumamoto.
It is the thing which bean pastes and sweet potatoes are wrapped in dough of flour.
The recipe is very easy. Even when unexpected guests visit you, you can serve it to them soon (in Kumamoto dialect "ikinari" ). So, this sweet is called "Ikunari Dango"
It is very delicious.




●Horsemeat
It's one of a original features who lives in Kumamoto. We eat HORSE MEAT!! We eat it with soy source or roast it a bit with soy source added garlic. It suit ables to eat with alcohol. Many drunk loves to eat it. But it's a little expensive to eat basashi. It's a kind of gorgeous dish.



●Chikuwa
Hinagu town in Yatsushiro has Chikuwa. Chikuwa made from fish. Its shape is like a tube. Chikuwa means "bamboo ring". First, ground fish is rolled around bamboo. Second, it's baked. Finally, bamboo is pull out. The shape is round so its name is Chikuwa. Hinagu has many chikuwa shops.



Sightseeing spots
●Yamaga
Yamaga is very popular place about hot springs and an important cultural asset.
. There is a "Yatiyo-za" that is Japanese old style theatre. Once upon a time, Kabuki is played there. Sometimes Kabuki actors come to play it and we can watch it now.
And hot spring is soft water. If you touch it, you feel like clammy. It made our skin clean and beauty.


●Aso
Aso is most famous sightseeing spot in Kumamoto.
It has many good nature, food, hot spring place to visit and so on.
Mt. Aso is very famous. You should eat ice cream cone. You can enjoy the monkey show.
Depends on the season, you can enjoy picking fruits.
Every time you go to Aso, you can have good experiences.
Aso is my recommended spot.


●Hitoyoshi
Hitoyoshi is a nice sight seeing spot in Kumamoto. It is famous for hot springs. There are many hot springs. It is also famous for farms. Tere are many cows in the city. If you go to there, you can drink fresh milk. It is very rich. Please go to Hitoyoshi if you can go.


Famous people
●sport
Maki
Seiichiro Maki is a professional football player from Kumamoto. He is also one of representative of Japan. He played in the world cup in Germany.
He also loves his hometown Ogawa. He sometimes meet the chair person of his hometown. He takes part in event in Kumamoto. He got married recently. I hope his sprint.


●Comedian
Cream stew
Cream Stew is famous comedian in Japan. It group has two members, Arita and Ueda. They are from Kumamoto. They graduated from high school in Kumamoto which famous for be inteligent. Them comic skits and gags are very amusing. Recently, we often see them on TV. They are popular comedian.


●Historian
Natsume Soseki
He is one of the most famous novelist. It's a evidence, why he is so famous. He printed as a 1000 yen bill by be praising his great novels.
He lives in Kumamoto because he loves Kumamoto. When he arrived here for the first time, he calls Kumamoto "Capital of light". Half of his Haiku(poem) is made in Kumamoto.



Leisure spots
●Mt. Kinpo
Mt. Kinpo is 665 meters above sea level and it is a volcano. Did you know that?
It is the mountain which is symbol of Kumamoto City and it is known that Mt. Kinpo was used in the one scene of Soseki Natsume's novel "Kusamakura".
You can enjoy the night view of Kumamoto City in the evening.
I recommend watching sunset and night view from there.




●Amakusa
Amakusa is west of Kumamoto. It has beautiful sea. If you go to there, you can eat many kind of fish and shellfish. They are delicious. In summer, you can swim in the sea. Amakusa has many beaches. They are very beautiful and you can be relax.



●Kikuchi valley
Kikuchi valley lies in north of Kumamoto prefecture. We feel cool because the air is very fresh. If we feel hot in summer, you go there. Kikuchi valley is also cool during summer. The nature is plenty. The water is very clean. It is chosen as best 100 water in Japan.



Conclusion

What do you think about Kumamoto? I think it is a very nice place to live or visit. I will find the good points of Kumamoto more and I want to introduce it for you.
[971 words]

Book Review 2-01


I read Nelson Mandela.
I think he is a great person. His efforet gave all the people in South Africa freedom.
He didn't give up fighting with white government thouth he put in a prison for 27 years.
He got Novel peace prize.
[43 words]